A wonderful write. Please accept this. It would be wise to make much smaller paragraphs for stories on medium because a great deal of readers will not have patience to go through large blocks of writing. 3 to 4 sentences max.

This format fits better for phones. Short sentences coupled with long sentences.

Short paragraphs.

You are a throrough storyteller. Get read by short attention spans with brevity and concise explanations.

The depth of your words is awesome.

I feel the pain you communicate.

Take my advice or not but please keep on writing beautifully. I hope writing is a great healing and freeing tool for you.

Bringing real feelings along with messages of inspiration and imagination to life. Awakening is the symptom of my infectious condition. Poetry is my condition.

Bringing real feelings along with messages of inspiration and imagination to life. Awakening is the symptom of my infectious condition. Poetry is my condition.